I like the changes; the piece looks more solidly cohesive instead of broken into separate sections. Maybe 'shut down' could be bigger, spreading more like the top of a banner? What I do see is that the shut is tilted upward, but down is not tilted in a balanced way to finish the arc you started to make. Definitely looking really good, though! I like that you're sharing the edits as you go.
Thanks! I just made some updates to reflect your feedback!